(Within the topic select concrete examples from own personal experience, observations from at least two interview with people who are known about the topic. Then decide on thesis, support and tone that will be best to the topic.)
(Express opinion (must be arguable) with logical reasons and examples.)
(Need detailed notes from interview. )
(Argument must be on own ideas, experience and your interviews. )
( Focus should not be on the interview but in the concrete examples you can use from them to prove you opinion)
( Be sure ti put interviews in context by formally introducing the interviewee at the beginning of example and explaining how this example fits with points of the paragraph)
( Longest quite should be a sentence or two at the maximum)
(Need separate rough draft for the essay that should be examined)